Friendships shine in my heart,
like the light of the moon,
your friends stand there,
bright as day,
but sad as night,
while you stand there,
hoping the sadness goes away,
the happiness comes,
like the bright sunrise,
and stays alive,
until the end of day.
2 comments:
The revisions you did on this poem are a great improvement! It makes real good sense. My favorite part is still, "Bright as day / but sad as night".
your poetry is like me and my friends friendship so i say good job on it
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