Who are you I don't even know anymore.
You're like another person,I've never met before.
You make me confused,you play with my heart,
Saying,I'm the one who keeps us apart.
Please,comeback,I miss old one you
You've changed in my eyes
You're not the one I knew.
I loved what you do and love what you are,
But that is enough,I said to my heart.
I'm done trying now,to find what to say
My last words,good bye and stay,please,away!!!!
2 comments:
The last line of this poem shows real skill in creating rhythm. The exclamation points detract from the poem a little bit and make it feel like a text message, though.
this is some kind of strong because you're traying to say good bye to something that you don't what to see again,,,
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